Wednesday, July 8, 2009

the ETERNAL MOON

Never knew what’s next
But craved for it with an ecstasy never in rest
Can life be more miraculous then it seems
Does it really have another side of verve often in our dreams?


It feels way apart,
Nothing ever seems to start
Life resonates as a complete maze
Bestowing within a flamboyant breathing phase


Once oneself is on cloud nine,
the other second nothing is left in it to shine
Life reflects in it emblematic analogy of a star
Which seems elegant that’s because it is too far


If gone on an expedition once on it for all
Then you will realize how mystifying is the divine
and enigmatic is the supreme powers call
I feel my mind under the weight of internal fray
Mulling over what happens to the moon during the day

I ruminate and know stars do shine all night
But what about day when sun spreads its light
Is charismatic charm of enthralling
desolated moon snatched for a while
Some devilish powers arresting it’s
another fortune, being put to dial


does answer lies up in the sky
where in the day charismatic
life of the beloved moon die


grueling to know if the murkiness
dimness of moon predicts its nature
weighing upon it seems like an
inexhaustible journey, like a novel treasure


one night out in the muted haze
In my garden I strolled, dazed
Fervent to know the tradition of dynamic moon
While walking through, found a vibran
t radiance on the path quite soon


“Soon” in essence to be highlighted
Never knew the sturdy moon in its
authentic crystal look could ever be sighted
The feel of the mystic was in cage
For now the real I in me came out on with rage


The moon shed its all enigmatic rides onto me
I wondered how prodigious one can be
I wandered up in the sky
oh look the real moon with its
dimness is a way for it to spy


one thing was clear there are reasons
for everything here no one is almighty
no one is meager .Its just a matter of time
that one with power also fails to shine


but as the time rhymes
at off-shores one sees only good signs
So every-time the time shrugs off with a new phase
a new life is bestowed overnight to all for the forgone chase.


so the words bewail, lament are to be disposed
for they just are the tools to make us recklessly posed
apparently that’s the work of the glinting moon
to keep a watch on devils so all of us can sleep with unrest soon


that night changed me eternally
for I came to know that ,we all
have the same power perpetually
its great to realize everyone’s especial
and that’s how moon abides in it an aura so magical


Then what!! my heart underwent a sudden thud
Which lasted few seconds and I found myself in the bed as a bud
Smiling my heart out, i looked at the all klein blue sky
the mystical moon was waving enlightening me saying good bye

1 comment:

  1. Good use of words, but I couldn't find a definite theme... parts have been written wonderfully, but they don't add up together, each has its own story!
    Flow is not smooth and constant...
    Poem is too long! :) Its advisable not to post such long poems online... people generally prefer not to read them! I read it because I love criticizing others... :D
    Catchy title, BTW.

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